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WE USED TO BE ONE DROP 
By Nicolas V. 

We trickled down together, 
We landed with a big splash, 
And mother nature decided to 
Separate us. 

I wish we were back together, 
Like those nights in the blue ocean, 
But when the sky turned grey, 
These memories went away.

I must now be intrepid,
and jump from my leaf to yours,
because even though we're next to each other,
there is a gap in between us.

We used to be one drop,
but now we are torn apart.
Arafat
9/3/2010 15:23:05

I really liked this poem! The theme of this poem is very well-thought, and it can easily relate to life.

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9/9/2010 08:34:26

I love this poem! "We used to be one drop" I love your metaphors. How you" landed with a big splash. I wish the poem was longer and more in depth but I love what you've done here! :)

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